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How I Felt and How I Feel...

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I felt so alive...
When you were around me...

I felt so happy...
When I talked to you for hours on end...

I felt so nervous...
When I tried not to mess things up...

How did I mess things up?
How did I lose your love?

You were always with me...
I was always with you...
Always together...
Always in love...

Nothing could seprate us...
Nothing could tear us apart...
Take away our love for eachother...

Until that day...
When fate did its thing...

Then came up another guy...
He took you away...

Now you two together...
Most probably for ever more...

I'm still here...
Left in the shame...
Tossed on the curve...
Left in the pain...

How you did that to me?
I do not know...

Will you do that to him?
I don't really care...

Becuase that fatefull day...
I introduced you to one another...
You fell in love with him...
Him with you...

Now where am I?
Here still waiting for you to return...
I can't stop thinking about you...
I try and I try..

But I can't forget....
You and me were too close to forget...
The guy's basically gotten over the situation with them but still... you always know there will be something inside of you...

You don't know what... But you know it's there... You still think of that person...
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FrostSinth's avatar
A nice entry. I really like how you put them in mostly couplets to get across the power of the emotion.

Oh, and thanks for the fave on "Goodnight".